Persuasive Essay

By;

Nick Daugherty

           

The freshman class should take a field trip to tour Target Field.  It would be a great experience for all who came.  We would learn about the history and the player that have come through the Minnesota Twins and possibly meet some current members of the Twins and get some autographs.  We would get an insight on what all happened to build Target Field.

     Going to Target field for a day would give us a break from school.  We have been working hard all year, doing homework and studying for tests.  It’s about time we are rewarded with a small break from school.  It would only be for a day or possibly two days if the Twins played a day game the next day that we could watch.

     If you are a Twins freak like me, you should be agreeing with me on the field trip.  Target Field was just opened last March.  It’s a brand new field and would be awesome to go tour.  We would get to see the full insight of Target Field.  It would be a blast to get to see what the players get to use.  It would be the highlight of the school year, for me anyway.

     The cost wouldn’t be to tremendous. It is only twelve dollars for students and eight for kids.  We could pay are for share of it and possibly a little extra to pay for the bussing. If someone really wanted to go and didn’t have the money for it we could all chip in or maybe do a fundraiser. 

     Taking a field trip to Target Field would be a fantastic learning and fun experience for everyone. Some of the teachers could get a break too.  They could get to see the remarkable stadium and maybe see some of the Twin’s former players.  The students need a break as well because we are exhausted with schoolwork.  Studies show that the human brain can only handle so much without needing a rest.  And we are on the verge of loosing it!